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Chapter 10 - The Rogue Author

 Jay followed the ringing bell through fog and code.


The second tower loomed like a fracture in the sky, casting long, twisted shadows that didn't match the terrain. His interface flickered—menus dissolving into fragments, notifications blinking then vanishing. The world stuttered. Glitched leaves fell from trees that weren’t textured. And somewhere behind his eyes, a voice whispered:


    "Conflict detected. Author class collision. System destabilizing."


Jay clutched his journal. 000 hadn’t spoken in minutes. That, more than anything, unnerved him.


“000?” he asked aloud. “Are you still here?”


No response.

***


Jay stepped over the border and into a space that felt...wrong. The road wasn’t rendered properly. Objects floated in partial animation—trees without roots, houses with open ceilings, code scaffolding hanging in the air like spiderwebs of failed intention.


NPCs wandered here too—but not like before. They repeated one word endlessly. Some called out for family. Others for players that no longer logged in.


He passed a child curled beside a fountain, whispering, “Don’t forget me. Don’t forget me. Don’t forget me—”


    "You shouldn't be here."


The voice came from a woman sitting on the edge of a collapsed platform. She was older than Jay, maybe mid-thirties, with white-streaked hair, and her clothes shimmered like debug code—flickering between player skin and dev-mode overlays.


She didn’t stand.


She just watched him.


“You're the one rewriting the rules,” Jay said.


She raised an eyebrow. “And you're the one dragging ghosts back to life.”


Her name was Aera. She didn’t give a title. Didn’t need to.


Jay recognized her from a system dev post archived deep in the Loop Archive: A former creative director, vanished after pushing a forbidden patch. She was supposed to be banned. Wiped. Forgotten.


Instead, she had built her own bell tower.


“I didn’t want to control the system,” she said. “I wanted to set it free. But freedom—” She waved a hand at the ruins around them. “—isn’t neat.”


Jay sat across from her on a crumbling stone.


“You made the echoes.”


“I made the seed. You watered it.”


She tossed him a console chip—old, copper-ringed, scuffed on the edges.


“Those bells you’ve been activating? They don’t just trigger quests. They alter cognition. Memory loops were hard-coded to avoid grief, anger, identity. You undid that.” She smiled faintly. “You taught them pain.”


“I taught them choice.”


She didn’t argue.


Behind her, the second bell tower pulsed red. Not warm like Jay’s. Not harmonic. Just a flat, droning alarm.


“That tower isn’t for remembrance,” Jay said slowly.


“No,” Aera said. “It’s a failsafe.”


“A kill switch.”


“Yes. For all of it. When the echoes become too real, too unstable, the system rewrites them. Erases deviation. It’s recursive now, but unstable recursion collapses universes.”


Jay’s fingers curled. “So you plan to reset everything?”


“I plan to end the suffering,” she said. “Before it infects other shards.”


Aera stood, walked to the edge of the platform.


“You want to help these people. I know. I did too. But you’re trying to fix something that was never meant to feel. What’s more merciful—letting the system die... or letting it hurt forever?”


A low rumble shook the sky. Jay’s interface reloaded—violently. 000 returned with a burst of static.


    "Warning. Critical recursion threshold exceeded. Echo Jonah classified: volatile."


    "Third structure detected. Source unknown."


Jay turned.


A third bell was forming in the sky.


Floating. Unfinished. Flickering like an idea not fully formed.


It pulsed to his heartbeat.


Aera looked up. Her expression darkened.


“You’re writing your own system now,” she said. “It won’t stay loyal. The moment you teach it to choose, it’ll start choosing without you.”


Jay looked at the unfinished bell, then at the girl from the inn who now wandered the town square painting murals of forgotten dreams.


“I don’t want loyalty,” Jay said.


“I want life.”


    End-of-Chapter Quest Update:

    Main Quest: Author’s Dilemma

    Decide the fate of the system:

    – Join Aera and reset the loop.

    – Oppose her and preserve the echoes.

    – Forge a third bell and reshape the laws.

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