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Chapter 5 - The Forgotten House

The fog was heavier today.

It clung to Jay’s boots like a warning, turning every building on the edge of town into a silhouette with blurred edges. The quest board had changed again—letters flickering like flame:

    Echo 1: Seek the place the town denies.
    Where toys gather dust, and names rot from doors.

Jay traced the message with his finger. The red ribbon beside it had darkened overnight.

000 hovered behind him, flickering faintly, as if something was interfering with his presence.

    "Identified anomaly: cartographic dead zone. Sector F12. Urban memory gap detected."

Jay stared at the town map laid across the table. There was a gray, unmarked section on the edge of town. No house. No street name.

But when Jay walked there, he found it.

The house was wrong.

It shouldn’t have been there. The ivy smothered its windows like hands over eyes. The door had no knob, just splinters. Wind refused to whistle through its boards. There was no sound at all—no birds, no insects, no wind.

Just stillness.

Jay climbed through a broken side window.

The air was too cold. A child’s shoe sat by the threshold. Nearby, a broken doll slumped in the corner, one glass eye staring into nothing.

000 buzzed behind him.

    "Signal degraded. Visual inputs blurred. Recommendation: egress."

“I can’t leave yet,” Jay whispered.

The house was silent, but the moment Jay stepped deeper in, the front door vanished. Gone. Behind him, just a blank wall.

In the parlor, everything was half-frozen in time: a birthday banner hung halfway across the ceiling, its letters faded. A cake rotted on a low table. Faded crayon drawings lined the walls—smiling stick figures with no faces.

A music box sat on a mantle.
Engraved on its lid: “For Ada.”

Jay turned the key. A cracked lullaby played—a haunting, off-key tune.

Suddenly, the house shifted.

The air shimmered like water. The room grew warm. Laughter echoed faintly, as though from another layer of time.

Jay spun around.

Children danced in a circle. Their outlines flickered, insubstantial, replaying the same motion over and over. One empty space remained in the circle.

“Where’s Ada?” they whispered in unison.
“Where’s Ada?”

The Girl in Red appeared on the ceiling.

Barefoot. Grinning. Her head cocked at an unnatural angle.

“Did you forget her too?” she asked, her voice upside-down and inside-out.

Jay’s grip on the mirror shard in his coat pocket tightened.

“Why is this house forgotten?”

The Girl blinked. “Because forgetting is easier than grief. They erased her. But memories cling.”
She giggled. “That’s what makes them Echoes.”

She vanished in a blink, and the room twisted again—melting back into the ruined parlor.

000 buzzed back to life.

    "Identified Echo anchor: item missing. Likely personal artifact. Ada's memory fragment incomplete."

Jay searched the house—behind crumbling wallpaper, beneath warped floorboards.

Under the nursery, he found a locket: a small golden oval with the engraving “My brightest candle.”

Inside: a photo of Ada. A little girl in red, smiling with a missing tooth.

Jay brought the locket back to the parlor. The music box started playing again on its own.

This time, Ada appeared—soft, flickering like candlelight.

She looked at him. “You found me?”

Jay held out the locket.

“I remembered you.”

The ghost smiled.

The other children stopped dancing. One by one, they vanished. Ada stepped toward him, touched the locket, and whispered, “Thank you.”

Then she too was gone.

The house began to shudder.

Plaster cracked. Dust rose like smoke. Jay ran toward the window he’d entered through—now just a door again.

Outside, the fog lifted for just a moment, revealing a small girl standing in the field, waving at him.

Ada.

But in the next blink, she was gone.

Back at the inn, Jay slumped onto the couch. His boots were caked with ash. 000 hovered nearby, flickering worse than ever.

On the wall, the quest board updated.

    [Echo 1/3 Freed – 2 Remaining]

Jay went to wash the ash from his hands—but the mirror in the washroom showed something else:

His eyes were not the same color anymore.

***
๐Ÿ“„ ECHO MEMORY LOG // ADA.003

File Origin: [Unstable Memory Sector — Sector F12]
Subject: Ada (Child, Age 7)
Designation: First Echo
Status: Freed

[BEGIN RECORDING // Audio/Text Hybrid Stream]

>> birthday_song.wav//LOADING...
๐ŸŽต "Happy birthday dear..." ๐ŸŽต [CORRUPTED DATA]

>> Child Voice:
"Where is she?"
"I saved her a piece. I did."
"Don’t blow out the candles yet. She’s just hiding."

>> Whisper overlay (multiple voices):
“They never found her.”
“They locked the room.”
“She screamed too long.”
“We forgot.”

>> Visual Fragment: 
> A red ribbon lies on the floor. 
> The door closes. 
> Silence.

>> System Note:
!WARNING! Memory anchor splintering.
Stabilizing… Attempt failed.

>> Ghost Memory (Ada):
"Mom said I was her brightest candle.
I tried to stay lit.
I tried.

But darkness eats little things first."

[System Update → Echo Released]

๐Ÿ”” Memory stabilized
๐Ÿงท Object anchor restored: Locket
๐Ÿ‘️ Residual haunting: Low
๐ŸŒซ️ NPC Ada added to global table [non-interactive state]

[Residual Message Logged by 000:]

    "She was never meant to vanish. But they made her forgettable. That’s worse than death."


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